Your story is quite amazing, are you ever going to finish it? Or give it for adoption or at list post an epilogue about how it ends?
I hope you don´t leave unfinished this great great story. Also, your writting is really good.
You even got a person that lives across the world -in latin america- to be reading it until 5 am
So please finish it!! Even if it takes you years, but be sure, there be people -like me- waiting to have a clousure.
Thanks for creating it, good luck.